Response to Pitch

Response:

- More verbal domestic violence, rather than physical abuse. Showing the emotional side of things.

- The artists voice is mystical, urban so to include these scenes into my video was thought to be a good idea.

- Using a run down derelict housing estate - In Horsley there is evacuated, run down council houses which could be effective for filming in the urban area.

- A few people suggested to have a mystical, fairy character singing in an urban area to contrast the two elements.

- Having two or more different scenes was complimented as it makes it much more interesting and draws more attention and interest from the audience.

- Somebody suggested that the abusive side is delicately told, not too harsh.

- Another idea somebody had was instead of having her partner abusing her, having a child living with her father abusing her mother as it has a much stronger meaning and more powerful.



I found that the response I was given was helpful as it was given from my main target audience, which makes it more reliable and valuable.

After I was given advice from various people I re thought about my idea and decided to take in the advice about having verbal abuse rather than physical, as I think it could be too harsh other wise. I will try and tell it more delicately which was another point I have reconsidered.